My Tweet Was Too Long, So

Gospel Haiku

Pure God, sinful man.
Jesus took the penalty.
Trust him or face wrath.

4 Comments

Filed under Attempts at poetry, Gospel

4 responses to “My Tweet Was Too Long, So

  1. Jim, kudos on the haiku, so I gave it a whirl:

    Gospel Theologic-haiku:
    Jesus’ Incarnation
    Man’s Sole Propitiation
    Believe: Justified

    or alternatively (4-line)

    God is Light and Love
    Man is Dark and Lives against God
    Jesus, God’s Son-King, dies for darkness and Lives
    Turn to Jesus:Live in Him

    MMO

  2. Daniel

    I think this is actually more of a senryu than a haiku.

  3. Pingback: Gospel haiku « Towards a Gospel-Centred Church

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s